OMG! you gave him a flail chest! EEP! I am SO sorry it took me so long to get to this - my own fic was giving me coniptions and I only posted it today, just under the wire. And I wouldnt allow myself to ready anything else until I got my s*** together.

I absolutely loved the image of John and Rodney exchanging knowing, exhausted looks and collapsing on their benches. You write Rodney SO well - I can HEAR David Hewlett's voice.

This is awesomely written and I am already pleased with 'my' fic- and it's only part one!