Nicely done. Your writing shows a clear affection for McKay - you write him like you're channeling him. The time changes were cool - I liked the way you tied in S1 canon occurences to how things have developed in the years since. The medical details were well-researched and well-used without being too complex or dumbed down.
Thank you for this effort I look forward to reading more from you in the future.
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Date: 2008-01-06 08:49 am (UTC)Thank you for this effort I look forward to reading more from you in the future.