Oh this was just lovely. I adore how you've interposed the events of two different times, contrasting how the team functions at varying stages of their relationship. Fab idea and it works so well. Your medical terminology and description is confident and believable, oh and the Shep whump, in both time frames, is just delicious!
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Date: 2010-03-07 11:16 pm (UTC)