Date: 2007-12-24 03:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ferret-kitty.livejournal.com
*glomps* This is great! I liked the way you changed it to parallel the situations more. Tons of fun.

This, this is still my favorite bit:

“You know, your bedside manner bites,” Sheppard bitched. He set his P90 down so that his clenching hand wouldn't cause an accident.

“But my rockside manner is oddly appropriate, don't you think?
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