Wonderful, wonderful!!! I loved the way you shifted between then and now, illustrating how the characters have grown, both in skills and in their trust for one another. Loved John talking Rodney into staying on the team (“Well, I kept quiet yesterday when you asked me to so nicely. So, shut up and listen.”). John and Rodney were pefect, as well as everyone else. This really made my night!!!!
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Date: 2007-12-24 02:42 am (UTC)